Happy Happy Happy

So, how was my poem? Was it good? I'm thinking about entering it in a poem contest.
I love poetry. <3

So, I am very happy right now. I have a secret, and I'm thinking about tellin it, but I'm not sure. Tell me if ya wanna hear!

-Doodle&Jacques&Billie <3

Flowers

Here's a poem I wrote- hope you like it!

FLOWERS

If women were flowers
And men were bees
When comes a rain shower
Our bees might leave
But we brave through the storm.
When the sun shines again,
We grow
And we know
That our bees are gone,
But we
Are here
To stay.

If women were kittens
And men were pups
Our world would be filled with me-ows
And ruffs.
But when other cats came,
Our dogs ran with them.
We knew we should hate, but we loved instead,
And now that you're gone, I feel so dead.
But as we grow
We come to know
That our dogs have run away,
But there
Are more
Loyal dogs
To find.

If I were the Sun
And you were the Moon
We'd be so far apart.
But the strength
In our love is
Our distance-immune hearts.
As time goes on,
We tend to learn
We'll see each other soon.

If women were flowers
And men were bees
The bees might stay,
Or they might flee.
The bees, they have a choice, you see,
Bee goes from flower to flower,
Not flower from bee to bee.
But now I'm grown
And I have known
This feeling of Flowery.